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Smile a while oh weary hermit This life is but a dream God will take us to the summit Let heart gently love stream Our lower mind outlawed Give pulse of love a nod Be still and trust in God Discard guile Smile a while 06-November-2022 Quietus

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Date: 11/7/2022 8:14:00 PM
Can't say it any better than this, Seeker. Smiles dispel the gloom and the doom!
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Date: 11/8/2022 2:16:00 AM
Like bubbling childlike innocence
Date: 11/7/2022 7:51:00 PM
"Discard guile Smile a while"..... A lovely message if put to practice can earn much love and blessings from others. As ever, pearls of wisdom from you, dear Seeker friend !
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Date: 11/8/2022 2:15:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa