Smile

How beautifully, the seagulls fly
Above the waves, up into the sky!
Over the troubled ocean’s horizon.
Over the wonders having a reason.

In front of that playful inner smile
Surely,we can wait a little while 
Mirroring in startling emerald eyes,
When each time offers a kiss-surprise.

How carefully, the tender breeze
Embraces the obstinate young trees! 
Caresses the red poppies`feet,
In the blond field, where we meet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/26/2017 3:18:00 PM
Oh so lovely with such soft, sensual appeal! Beautifully written and a joy to read bringing a smile to my face! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 3/26/2016 5:43:00 PM
Very beautiful Ovidiu ! I enjoy visiting your poems! Ren
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Date: 7/31/2015 10:34:00 PM
Sweet melody, and lovely imagery. This is wonderful...
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:05:00 PM
Beautiful smile of love beautifully worded my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:29:00 PM
:) Brought smile to my face. Lovely imagery. Emerald eyes can be enchanting. Thanks for your visit to my poem.
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Date: 4/6/2015 9:50:00 AM
This poem flows nice and has great imagery. Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Emile.
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:04:00 AM
Hi Ovidiu: A very poetic approach to a SMILE. My compliments!
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Date: 2/2/2015 11:22:00 AM
Lovely poem!
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Date: 1/31/2015 9:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem of nature, Ovidiu, 7 Eve
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Date: 1/31/2015 6:22:00 PM
What a wonderful blending of nature and emotions, love the part about the emerald eyes, and how you pulled your verses together in the final climax, really well done, you've mae this broken doll smile tonight lol, thanks also for your comment on my poem by the way, I appreciate your feed back and hope you will stop by my site again, sometimes and I will return the favor, you have a great night cheri
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:44:00 PM
A great pen Ovidiu... loved your right.. #7..thank you for your visit and comments on my poem...nad!
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