Smile

How beautifully, the seagulls fly
Above the waves, up into the sky!
Over the troubled ocean’s horizon.
Over the wonders having a reason.

In front of that playful inner smile
Surely,we can wait a little while 
Mirroring in startling emerald eyes,
When each time offers a kiss-surprise.

How carefully, the tender breeze
Embraces the obstinate young trees! 
Caresses the red poppies`feet,
In the blond field, where we meet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 3:18 PM
Oh so lovely with such soft, sensual appeal! Beautifully written and a joy to read bringing a smile to my face! Best regards. Pandita
Yanai Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Very beautiful Ovidiu ! I enjoy visiting your poems! Ren
Canon Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Sweet melody, and lovely imagery. This is wonderful...
Devnath  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:05 PM
Beautiful smile of love beautifully worded my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:29 PM
:) Brought smile to my face. Lovely imagery. Emerald eyes can be enchanting. Thanks for your visit to my poem.
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 9:50 AM
This poem flows nice and has great imagery. Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Emile.
Sergi Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Hi Ovidiu: A very poetic approach to a SMILE. My compliments!
Leuba Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Lovely poem!
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful poem of nature, Ovidiu, 7 Eve
Dunn Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:22 PM
What a wonderful blending of nature and emotions, love the part about the emerald eyes, and how you pulled your verses together in the final climax, really well done, you've mae this broken doll smile tonight lol, thanks also for your comment on my poem by the way, I appreciate your feed back and hope you will stop by my site again, sometimes and I will return the favor, you have a great night cheri
Relish Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 12:44 PM
A great pen Ovidiu... loved your right.. #7..thank you for your visit and comments on my poem...nad!
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