Smile

His big brown eyes--
                                        --linger in A distance...
                                    I Smile back at him.

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Wendia Rowe

Date: 1/6/2013 2:56:00 PM

You know the funny thing is when i clicked on this poem and read it,I smiled as i envisioned myself @ 15 and fell in love with a brown eyed guy, that's exactly how I felt. And the poem gives off that sudden feeling of spring then it just flies passed so short and sweet,those 3 lines. I think I'm gonna write about him,lol. I am inspired.

Carma Sanderson
Date: 1/15/2013 8:38:00 PM

Keep smiling Wendia, love making ppl smile, and inspiration, is what I love too see, and I can't wait to read about your him lol love always my dear poet..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2012 8:52:00 PM

Hello, Carma I imagine this guy smiling at you,,, weee...I know the feeling when a guy smiles at me.. I look right back and add a blink to that smile I'm sending him... love this ku...pd

Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/5/2012 11:35:00 PM

Hi PD I know he is, for sure I am that LUCKY GIRL in his eye...