Smile

A smile is a curve that sets everything straight -Phyllis Diller Diller looks hilarious, yet she is shrewd. gaudy shapeless wardrobe not subdued. long and straight from lips, meanwhile - smoke holder is vile. Phyll’s snapshot: SMILE. flowerpot on top of profile, tremendous garden fertile: gargoyle unkempt hair, turns up the mood. Diller looks hilarious, yet she is shrewd. 1/19/2023 Sponsor: Constance La France Andaree Form

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2023 11:46:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2023 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2023 7:06:00 AM

Kim, a fun poem and quote, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2023 7:51:00 AM

Thank you, Constance!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2023 7:43:00 PM

Ooo. Wickedly well-done, Phyllis. She was my favorite female comedian. I always loved her line about housework: "They say housework might kill you. So why should I be the one to find out?!" Cheers, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2023 11:05:00 AM

LOL! Love these old-fashioned icons that took on a certain persona and dressed the part! She was lots of fun! Thanks, Gershon!