Smelly Me -Song Lyric Contest

Stop buzzing round my head bee
I am not a flower
Message understood
I'll go and have a shower

I know I 'm smelling sweaty
This I must agree
Working in the garden
Has made a smelly me.

Buzz off and feed now
flowers over there
Go and fill on pollen
I'm a gardener that cares


Sing to my old man's a dustman
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y7GeZ3YmONw.    Wait til he starts the my old man part 

Penned 9 July 2013

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Cheesman Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 6:49 PM
You to those Bees! lol....got the beat flowing as I was reading your lyric .....Shaz
Ryerson Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 3:43 AM
HAHA!...Go pollinate a flower or something you stupid bee!...GREAT lyric Seren - Tim
Roberts Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Hi Tim thx for stopping by, the traffic is very slow as you can see lol ....Seren
Sivey Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 7:15 PM
This write is totally awesome my friend! You have written a spectacular poem here Seren! I truly loved reading this delightful piece this evening! Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Hi Russell without your comments, my poems wouldnt have any ....Seren
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