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the sea breeze is fresh and cool
we see the sun as a refracted jewel
daydreams come and go flowing with the tide
i can't help but wonder why there's another side

the horizon seem to be a million miles away
so are my thoughts on this most divine perfect day
solitude impassions forgiveness and release
it seems the whole world is finally at peace



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Date: 4/6/2025 8:34:00 PM
Why was I hoping for a rip-roaring tide to roll in and change everything? Must be my long dormant aggressive 'nature.' btw, Beautifully penned Line... , gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2025 11:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon ~

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