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Smells like freedom

the sea breeze is fresh and cool
we see the sun as a refracted jewel
daydreams come and go flowing with the tide
i can't help but wonder why there's another side

the horizon seem to be a million miles away
so are my thoughts on this most divine perfect day
solitude impassions forgiveness and release
it seems the whole world is finally at peace



AP: 3rd place 2025, 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Why was I hoping for a rip-roaring tide to roll in and change everything? Must be my long dormant aggressive 'nature.' btw, Beautifully penned Line... , gw
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 11:50 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon ~
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