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Smell of Lilacs

Rainstorm as the ocean waves form Form and roars warm in my heart as you walk Walk into pitch black room and lock Lock and transform the silence of the room in essence Essence of your smell of lilacs Lilacs light scent as you walk softly and rise on your toes Your toes dancing Breathtaking
12/22/2015 Poetry Contest: Combination of Three Words - Smell of lilacs, Pitch black room, Dancing Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 1/12/2016 8:14:00 AM
Eve, congratulations for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Hansteven.
Date: 1/10/2016 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve...Love LINDA
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Linda.
Date: 1/6/2016 3:21:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR GREAT WIN!!!! SARA
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2016 11:58:00 AM
You are quite welcome..Support is what we all need more of in our lives..Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page,Sara.
Date: 1/4/2016 12:51:00 PM
Congrats Eve to win the first place. Happy New Year. Anisha
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Anisha.
Date: 1/4/2016 10:18:00 AM
EVE, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Skat.
Date: 1/3/2016 3:54:00 PM
Love the writing form you used Eve...and congrats on the contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, David.
Date: 1/3/2016 11:27:00 AM
Can almost smell the lilacs! Congrats Eve!
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:34:00 AM
Eve, "Lilacs light scent as you walk softly and rise on your toes Your toes dancing Breathtaking" This poem is breathtaking..thank you for your participation in my contest! -luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/3/2016 11:05:00 AM
Laura, thank you so very much for my placement. Hugs sweet friend <3 :)
Date: 1/2/2016 6:55:00 PM
well written Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, W.S..
Date: 12/24/2015 11:33:00 PM
Eve, I enjoyed reading it. You write great poems. Happy Holidays and Best Wishes.
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:59:00 AM
Just the remembrance of the scent of lilacs in your poem conjured such a lovely experence. Lilacs don't grow in Hawaii and I wish they did. A beautiful entry. Best of luck in the contest. #7
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Date: 12/23/2015 10:09:00 PM
Eve, this is a lovely poem for the contest, best of luck, I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 12/23/2015 10:39:00 AM
Travelling through lines of beauty the essence of poetry I enjoyed! Good luck dearest Eve! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:25:00 AM
This is lovely, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/23/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Lin; it is getting harder and harder to think of what to write. I will give the collaborating a try thank you for the start. Hugs Eve

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