Smell of Lilacs

Rainstorm as the ocean waves form Form and roars warm in my heart as you walk Walk into pitch black room and lock Lock and transform the silence of the room in essence Essence of your smell of lilacs Lilacs light scent as you walk softly and rise on your toes Your toes dancing Breathtaking
12/22/2015 Poetry Contest: Combination of Three Words - Smell of lilacs, Pitch black room, Dancing Sponsored by: Laura Loo
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Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Eve, congratulations for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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January 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Hansteven.
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January 10, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve...Love LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Linda.
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January 6, 2016 at 3:21 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR GREAT WIN!!!! SARA
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January 12, 2016 at 11:58 AM
You are quite welcome..Support is what we all need more of in our lives..Sara
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page,Sara.
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January 4, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Congrats Eve to win the first place. Happy New Year. Anisha
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January 12, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Anisha.
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January 4, 2016 at 10:18 AM
EVE, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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January 12, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, Skat.
Fisher Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Love the writing form you used Eve...and congrats on the contest!
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, David.
Cheema Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Can almost smell the lilacs! Congrats Eve!
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January 3, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Eve, "Lilacs light scent as you walk softly and rise on your toes Your toes dancing Breathtaking" This poem is breathtaking..thank you for your participation in my contest! -luloo
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Laura, thank you so very much for my placement. Hugs sweet friend <3 :)
Sage Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:55 PM
well written Eve
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January 12, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks you for your constant support and inspiration. Appreciate your kind visits to my page, W.S..
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December 24, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Eve, I enjoyed reading it. You write great poems. Happy Holidays and Best Wishes.
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December 24, 2015 at 2:59 AM
Just the remembrance of the scent of lilacs in your poem conjured such a lovely experence. Lilacs don't grow in Hawaii and I wish they did. A beautiful entry. Best of luck in the contest. #7
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December 23, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Eve, this is a lovely poem for the contest, best of luck, I am loving it 7 ~
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December 23, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Travelling through lines of beauty the essence of poetry I enjoyed! Good luck dearest Eve! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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December 23, 2015 at 5:25 AM
This is lovely, Eve.
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December 23, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Thank you, Lin; it is getting harder and harder to think of what to write. I will give the collaborating a try thank you for the start. Hugs Eve
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