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Smarts

intellectual stilettos 
                   stepping on toes
         
              more than hips swaying







1/17/2020

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Robert Kinard

Date: 2/21/2020 12:29:00 AM

A powerful piece of poetry. You make me want to try my hand at writing shorter pieces.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/21/2020 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Robert!!! I've been razzed a bit for my shortness ;) I can't help myself, I whittle. xomo

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/16/2020 3:55:00 PM

Such powerful sentiments in only nine words, Maureen! Congratulations on First Place! Hugs, Sandra

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/16/2020 8:23:00 PM

Thank you Sandra! My muse had a field with this one ;), Hugs! xomo

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 2/15/2020 9:49:00 AM

Great senryu Maureen…Love it!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/15/2020 4:53:00 PM

Thank you Charlie! :))), xomo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/13/2020 8:06:00 PM

Congratulations Maureen. "Shorties" can be difficult to write. Nice work!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/14/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Sam! There's definitely a challenge competing with meatier pieces, less room to grab the reader. xomo!

John Watt

Date: 2/13/2020 2:38:00 PM

Maureen, impressive how much narrative you can distill into so few words. A hearty congrats on your #1 placement ~ John

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2020 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so much John! I do try ;), shorties aren't to everyone's taste. xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2020 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Julia's contest. Hugs Eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2020 6:41:00 PM

Thank you Eve, Hugs! xomo

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/13/2020 11:32:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2020 6:40:00 PM

Thank you Anisha! Warm hugs :), xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/13/2020 10:28:00 AM

Bravo on your top win, Maureen. Very witty.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2020 6:39:00 PM

Thank you Line! xomo <3

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 2/13/2020 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2020 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Janis, xomo :),

Julia Ward

Date: 2/13/2020 8:36:00 AM

Oh yes! A "woman message" to take to heart. Of course we are more! Love it! Well done for your top placement, beating all the others in this one out of thirty five chance, Maureen... Julia

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/13/2020 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Julia! I'm thrilled you love my little tart pome! ;D, xomo!