Smallest Ants

Smallest ants cast long shadows They are gifts of the meadows They fall into the steps With crepes of many shapes And fill the gaps with credos Even The Smallest Ants Cast Long Shadows - Poetry Contest Sponsor scott thirtyseven Poet: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 4th January,2015

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 1/4/2015 8:43:00 PM

Not sure if it is a limerick, but it is a good poem! I had to look up what credos meant, and am now reminded of the proverb that goes: Go to the ant, thou sluggard; consider her ways, and be wise: Which having no guide, overseer, or ruler, Provideth her meat in the summer, and gathereth her food in the harvest. Much to learn from the ant, and from Rajat! :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 1/4/2015 3:34:00 PM

nice... good luck in the contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2015 10:07:00 AM

Another good limerick from the Rajat busy pen! Good luck in the contest. // paul