small things

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sun …

glints off sweaty trickles as
they plop … plop …
little lad’s littler fingers tickling a
tide pool’s papery face
things of mysterious intention, darting
there to here to there …
wide eyes wider in amazement
tiny thrums quick’ning
dividing breaths
like swells divide the time
and tides …
a splash and a grasp, tightening
some small watery beast
cold-red cheeks blooming wide to
parody the dazzled bay
grins and giggles to mock the black-backs
for this shrimpy monster, squirming
is the prize of a wee fist
gamboling its way to
proffer some mad-mommy shrieks -
slimy and squiggly and
oh, so wondrous!
hunter, home from the hill
Ahab and his white sea demon
perfectly prideful,
invested surety of a silly smile
warmed by the sooty
afternoon …

sun.







Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, June 9, 2024

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Date: 6/24/2024 2:25:00 PM
Seriously! Like when you enjoy a great dinner and it's the total package that just leaves you flooded - that's what this poem does emotionally - leaves you in that moment when ... you were that child
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/24/2024 10:35:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Buddy, I’m really pleased you like this one - it’s special to me for just those reasons … the days when all the world was magical! Blessings, Good Friend!
Date: 6/12/2024 8:29:00 AM
Nice... enjoyed this poem and the reference to Moby Dick. I feel for the lad's poor mum. ;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/12/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, Eileen, I greatly appreciate your comments! <3
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