Small Forces

In the corner of the the house, outside
At the end of a long trail of cold, shut up windows 
There is a procession, a vigil kept through the night 
Beneath the notice of even the smallest branch 
Or the thoughts of a bird landing on a tree 
There is a band of brothers slaving for their home
Lining up as fine as thread
But chained together as if forged from steel 
Lifting broken leaves, a crumb of bread, a sugar crystal 
They're heaving cars, boulders, buildings 
Silently bearing their burden, they hold a torch for each other 
Tiny miracles in the night, performing feats of magic 
A struggle that defies ages past carries on- invisible 
All for their children they walk, martyred often 
While future generations of their families
Hang in the balance 



Jeremy Martin 2/19/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/16/2013 8:41:00 PM
Amazing tribute to these the least of our neighbors on this Earth. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2013 1:24:00 PM
Jeremy congratulation on your win. Nicely done. warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/16/2013 12:44:00 PM
Jeremy , CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD
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Date: 2/22/2013 5:24:00 PM
Are these ants??? I love a good mystery. I very much enjoyed the poem, reminicent of the borrowers.
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Date: 2/23/2013 6:28:00 AM
Hm...... :). The Borrowers are cool
Date: 2/19/2013 3:11:00 PM
powerful and perceptive - a wonderful combination! great poem...
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Ilene, I'm going to stop by your page and read some of your new poems :)
Date: 2/19/2013 1:44:00 PM
They really are amazing creatures...I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:58:00 PM
Yes they are, thanks Caleb!
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