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Small Feet

~The bride wore white gown, the groom his blue tux Symbol of wedding complete Shotgun did wedding vows ~Bride and groom together bear wedding bliss When sweet devotion is borne Small feet will walk on hearts For and in honor of Dr Ram And wedding contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2011 9:44:00 PM

I really liked this the first time I read it too, john. Big congrats on its win!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2011 10:54:00 AM

Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 7:37:00 AM

Terrific poem with a bit of wit as well, John. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

M. Alpestris

Date: 4/4/2011 6:22:00 AM

That's a nice last line. Congratulations! And thanks for stopping by my poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Moses in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/4/2011 2:51:00 AM

incredible, john.. best of cheers for the whooping win..:) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 7:21:00 PM

Loved that last line, small feet but big impact indeed! Really enjoyed reading this one, John :) Super congrats on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:20:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your fantastic win in the wedding contest with these brilliant words so special my friend.. honored to be sharing placement with u luv.. enjoy...

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/3/2011 5:02:00 PM

Just a wonderful Kimo, dear John! Congratulations on your WIN! Thank you for your comment. Love, Iolanda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2011 3:14:00 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, John

Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 6:52:00 PM

Top-notch Kimo my friend. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 6:00:00 AM

A wonderful Kimo Moses my friend.. paints a picture with your words and in the minds of the readers .. those small feet at the end walking on hearts is ultra creative.. good luck in the contest luv..

James Fraser

Date: 3/22/2011 11:45:00 AM

The way it should be John, good luck in Dr. Ram's contest with this beauty. Have a great day....:)

George Aul

Date: 3/22/2011 10:57:00 AM

Good luck with a great picture.........George

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/22/2011 8:48:00 AM

How cool that you noted the "shotgun wedding" and the "small feet" that will soon be walking on the bride and groom's hearts. Terrific entry for Dr. Ram's contest, John. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn (PS - You EARNED your wins with your talent and wisdom. Remember that!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 12:11:00 AM

ok, I reread this one and I see it VERY clearly. How did I miss the shotgun symbol? haha. NOT a kid with them yet for sure!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2011 3:34:00 PM

awesome including the child in this one, john. Is it a symbol of the unborn child or is that child already with them? I don't know many who believe in the pre-existence like I do, that is why I wondered.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/21/2011 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, john

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 10:52:00 AM

John I love how you incorporated the child in your entry.. Good luck to you with this gem ;) blessings Wilma