John Freeman Poet Kimo

Small Feet

~The bride wore white gown, the groom his blue tux
    Symbol of wedding complete
     Shotgun did wedding vows 

~Bride and groom together bear wedding bliss
    When sweet devotion is borne 
      Small feet will walk on hearts

For  and in honor of Dr Ram
And wedding contest

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Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2011 at 9:44 PM I really liked this the first time I read it too, john. Big congrats on its win!

Jack Horne April 4, 2011 at 10:54 AM Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2011 at 7:37 AM Terrific poem with a bit of wit as well, John. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

M. Alpestris April 4, 2011 at 6:22 AM That's a nice last line. Congratulations! And thanks for stopping by my poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on your win Moses in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 4, 2011 at 2:51 AM incredible, john.. best of cheers for the whooping win..:) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 3, 2011 at 7:21 PM Loved that last line, small feet but big impact indeed! Really enjoyed reading this one, John :) Super congrats on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 3, 2011 at 6:20 PM Congrats Moses on your fantastic win in the wedding contest with these brilliant words so special my friend.. honored to be sharing placement with u luv.. enjoy...

Iolanda Scripca April 3, 2011 at 5:02 PM Just a wonderful Kimo, dear John! Congratulations on your WIN! Thank you for your comment. Love, Iolanda

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, John

Elaine George March 31, 2011 at 6:52 PM Top-notch Kimo my friend. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 24, 2011 at 6:00 AM A wonderful Kimo Moses my friend.. paints a picture with your words and in the minds of the readers .. those small feet at the end walking on hearts is ultra creative.. good luck in the contest luv..

James Fraser March 22, 2011 at 11:45 AM The way it should be John, good luck in Dr. Ram's contest with this beauty. Have a great day....:)

George Aul March 22, 2011 at 10:57 AM Good luck with a great picture.........George

Carolyn Devonshire March 22, 2011 at 8:48 AM How cool that you noted the "shotgun wedding" and the "small feet" that will soon be walking on the bride and groom's hearts. Terrific entry for Dr. Ram's contest, John. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn (PS - You EARNED your wins with your talent and wisdom. Remember that!)

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2011 at 12:11 AM ok, I reread this one and I see it VERY clearly. How did I miss the shotgun symbol? haha. NOT a kid with them yet for sure!!!

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2011 at 3:34 PM awesome including the child in this one, john. Is it a symbol of the unborn child or is that child already with them? I don't know many who believe in the pre-existence like I do, that is why I wondered.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 21, 2011 at 12:50 PM Thanks for the entry, john

Wilma Neels March 21, 2011 at 10:52 AM John I love how you incorporated the child in your entry.. Good luck to you with this gem ;) blessings Wilma