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Small Bird

small bird, flap your wings autumn tree, its branches sway small bird, big effect

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/16/2023 8:09:00 AM

This is so stunning I absolutely love the way youve painted imagery through few syllables, descriptive and heartfelt, i can see through your words those birds.. pleasure always reading you, sending you light

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/16/2023 11:06:00 AM

Thanks so much for such incredible words, so pleased you liked it

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/15/2023 5:09:00 PM

Easy to picture this one, Clive. Hoping you are well and have a happy holiday season:)

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/15/2023 11:47:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, you too

Karen Croft

Date: 11/15/2023 4:41:00 PM

Nice haiku

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/15/2023 11:47:00 PM

Thank you Karen, appreciate you reading

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2023 3:05:00 PM

Great haiku.. imagery in only a few words.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/15/2023 3:10:00 PM

Thanks for your comment, much appreciated

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 2:55:00 PM

I love this, Clive. We have a gazillion small birds that hang out in our front yard. I often notice how one tiny bird flapping its wings makes the tree sway. This was marvelous. Thanks for your creativity and for visiting my site. I appreciate you. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/15/2023 3:00:00 PM

Yes, the implication that a small occurance can create a large one, like the butterfly effect really, all our actions no matter how small could make a real difference. Thanks for reading Sara