Sly Snake

Sly snake what a rakish slither
belly walker cunning talker
Persuade the moon to buy the sky
Charging moonbeams by the hour


**I think this is the first one for me...trying my hand at silly poems for children.
Many thanks to all who take the time to read my works!!
**Thanks CL Thornton for the tips!!~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beer Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Very intersting poem, Doris. I am sure it would grab the attention of children. Good work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for the comment on my poem Uncle Sam We Need You
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August 18, 2010 at 5:00 PM
i love your word usage(: sounds smooth! belly walker cunning talker.lol,lovely! ~Always&Forever Lynette
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August 18, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Another form that is new to me, but the imagery is awesome, Doris! C.L. is great about giving us helpful tips, isn't he? And he's such a talented writer too -- just like you. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Piquant Chastushka..I will have to look up the form and see what I can do with one..Mom
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