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Sly Snake

Sly snake what a rakish slither belly walker cunning talker Persuade the moon to buy the sky Charging moonbeams by the hour **I think this is the first one for me...trying my hand at silly poems for children. Many thanks to all who take the time to read my works!! **Thanks CL Thornton for the tips!!~~~

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Date: 8/22/2010 7:22:00 PM
Very intersting poem, Doris. I am sure it would grab the attention of children. Good work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for the comment on my poem Uncle Sam We Need You
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Date: 8/18/2010 5:00:00 PM
i love your word usage(: sounds smooth! belly walker cunning talker.lol,lovely! ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/18/2010 10:31:00 AM
Another form that is new to me, but the imagery is awesome, Doris! C.L. is great about giving us helpful tips, isn't he? And he's such a talented writer too -- just like you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2010 8:48:00 AM
Piquant Chastushka..I will have to look up the form and see what I can do with one..Mom
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