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Slumbering River

slumbering river reflects blue skies beneath sun mirrors moon by night deep in its belly meanders along the path to deliverance ~*~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 11:35:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Annelise, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/29/2013 2:05:00 AM

Excellent. Wonderful imagery write, Enjoyed. Tfs

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/28/2013 2:45:00 PM

There is this hidden power in your lines laced in this surfaced peace. Wonderful job!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2013 12:32:00 PM

Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading this very expressive and creative work..Those rivers just keep on rolling like many other things in life..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/28/2013 9:35:00 AM

Your words paint a beautiful picture as always! Love and big hugs, Jack xoxox

Jack Horne

Date: 7/27/2013 3:03:00 PM

love this picture, my friend. Hope you are having a great weekend xx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/27/2013 5:58:00 AM

WOW! Imagery is wonderful. The river seems so peaceful, yet you give the impression that there is much more going on under the surface.