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Slugs Leaving Trails

slugs leaving trails amongst the sunflowers - - fat toads croaking Jack Horne

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2012 12:37:00 PM

GOOD one Jack! really good! Congrad's on your win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/12/2012 8:19:00 PM

A great visual, Jack. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Jack. Love,Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2012 12:58:00 PM

Jack ,congrats on your win!Loved it!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/11/2012 12:29:00 PM

Congrats on your great win, Jack! Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/11/2012 9:39:00 AM

a swell deserved win with this fine 'ku, jack... congrats all the way!..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/11/2012 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations Jack xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2012 12:57:00 AM

congrats Jack on a perfect wein for perfect words luv. awessome piece..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2012 9:05:00 PM

Jack... slugs... oi... i mean toads will get lucky right... Jack, are them toads gonna have a fatter tummy soon..just wondering.. aren't slugs insects... curiosity..always..pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2012 10:58:00 AM

splendid visual effects with those frogs croaking Jack.. awesome as always luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2012 6:52:00 PM

now THIS to me is a great picture. I sure hope it is what he is wanting in his contest. It's got the sound and sight very nicely done!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2012 1:18:00 PM

Nice haiku with good juxtaposition. Best wishes jack.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2012 12:44:00 PM

I guess the toads enjoyed the slugs filled with sunflower leaves..Enjoyed reading the creativity...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2012 12:45:00 PM

Thanks for stopping at my work and reading..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/1/2012 12:26:00 PM

This poem is exactly what the contest requests! It shows all of the sponsors desires right on this poem! I love all of nature that you put on your write! Great Work!!