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Sluggish Slaughter

One red bell pepper In the flower pot, leaves gone Holes bored in the fruit No smoking gun by Juice in a jar lid will drown Many frustrations

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/12/2009 12:51:00 PM
The fruits of your labor in a jar of genius...Raul
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:13:00 PM
the fruit of poetic genius falls close to your family tree! nice!...jim..and thanks for your comments, Doris!
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:26:00 AM
Ah Yes Doris the problems of garden life.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/1/2009 11:48:00 AM
very Nice Haiku Doris, and you are welcome, your poem was very well written, soft and tender and the form was perfect. Nice job. Thank you for your comments on my poem also. ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/1/2009 11:38:00 AM
Nice Haiku Doris>>James
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:57:00 AM
A wonderful set of haiku>>>>>>>great job!
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Date: 8/31/2009 9:45:00 AM
Gardening never know what will happen. Those beautiful butterflies and moths can be destructive when they lay their eggs. Mom Sent you an email
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