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Slp

Thoughts. they twist, turn, and travel, in a passing pretentious place as one ponders crying, climatic, charismatic, characteristics containing to you. Delightedly doubtful, declining due to direct disbelief So subtle these thoughts are saying surely yet slowly sleep. Sleep Just sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/13/2009 10:40:00 AM
James - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/9/2009 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on your awesome alliteration being featured! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/9/2009 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>James
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week. Keep your pen sailing in the ocean of ideals and ideas. You are a such a awesome poet
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Date: 6/8/2009 12:09:00 PM
Interesting use of alliteration for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2009 9:25:00 AM
Congrats on "SLP" being featured, James. Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2009 6:10:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, greaat work, God bless you from diane
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Date: 12/13/2008 10:53:00 PM
Nice reflection...I like alot... *Breana*
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Date: 11/28/2008 6:03:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Nice use of alliteration. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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