James Faulkner Poet Alliteration

Slp

Thoughts.  they twist, turn, and travel,
in a passing pretentious place as one ponders
crying, climatic, charismatic, characteristics containing to you.
Delightedly  doubtful, declining due to direct disbelief 
So subtle these thoughts are saying surely yet slowly sleep. 
Sleep 
Just sleep

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Michael Jordan June 13, 2009 at 10:40 AM James - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter June 9, 2009 at 4:31 PM Congrats on your awesome alliteration being featured! Love, Shar

James Fraser June 9, 2009 at 12:16 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured>James

Adeleke Adeite June 9, 2009 at 8:25 AM Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week. Keep your pen sailing in the ocean of ideals and ideas. You are a such a awesome poet

June 8, 2009 at 12:09 PM Interesting use of alliteration for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 8, 2009 at 9:25 AM Congrats on "SLP" being featured, James. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2009 at 7:54 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Diane Christian June 8, 2009 at 6:10 AM congratulations on your poem being featured, greaat work, God bless you from diane

Breana Wiggins December 13, 2008 at 10:53 PM Nice reflection...I like alot... *Breana*

November 28, 2008 at 6:03 PM Interesting reflection. Nice use of alliteration. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen