Slowly

Killing herself slowly, as loudly as possible,
so that everyone hears her pain.
How bad can it get, this wound that she’s felt, 
as she digs in the despair, ripping deeper in the vein.
Tears to the skin, scars to the flesh,
trauma to her mind but she expects nothing less.
Selling her soul, just to numb her pain,
a temporary fix to her temporary shame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 5, 2023 at 1:36 PM
This is cute! :)
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August 23, 2015 at 7:17 PM
"Killing herself slowly, as loudly as possible, so that everyone hears her pain." Wow...I really liked that line..this is just awesome! I see your poem got featured before... it's definitely worth a feature! Always, Laura
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August 23, 2015 at 12:02 AM
Hi Clara, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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August 23, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Cool B) thanks Skat
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August 16, 2015 at 2:01 AM
Hi Clara, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 16, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Thank you so much :)
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August 15, 2015 at 11:47 PM
Clara, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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August 16, 2015 at 10:08 PM
I don't know what to say about myself really. I'm a big homebody, spend a lot of time with my daughter. I love art, reading, writing poetry (obviously), movies and music. Don't really know what else to say about myself lol. I'm pretty boring.
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August 16, 2015 at 10:05 PM
Hi Skat, thank you to the wonderful message. <3
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