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Slowly they undresses each other In the confines of their own space Naked to their flesh They stand face to face Slowly their hands grace Two bodies in desire of they Adults, two so in love In sensuous intended play Slowly they touch and kiss As their wants absorbs their thoughts Sheepskin rug they lie on The roaring fire, their shadows caught Slowly their hunger increases As they caress each other so Soon to join as one Passions of two in flow Slowly in motion and writhe The seeing of waves in slow motion Explosive of internal carnal Like the crashing of the ocean Slowly the roaring fire bows Their shadows collapse from the walls Spooned in heavenly lay The pleasure of two en-thralls http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2014 6:03:00 AM
slowly slowly you make this poem a rocket bowls of flush . :)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/1/2014 1:18:00 PM
Passion needn't be rush, rush. Such special moments between two in love, they decide, James :)x
Date: 9/6/2009 4:59:00 AM
My oh my James LOL what do I say to this , its hot ? love Jayne Thanks for your generous comments on my poem
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:36:00 AM
~~~Wow James~~~Very hot writing going on here. Outstanding writing today. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 10:54:00 PM
Very well done.....I am amazed and astounded....The Southern Belle Kristy De La Keur
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:31:00 PM
Are all the romantic men hiding in the Highlands? Beautiful and passionate, just as I would expect from the Highlander. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:06:00 PM
Very passionate work. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 1:57:00 PM
Hot one!! nicely done.
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