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Slowing Down

Although we’d like to do the things We’ve always done before, Our bodies sometimes let us know It’s time for less – not more. When we were young, we’d party hard And drink and stay out late; Yet now we find ourselves at home And nodding off at eight. A walk of several miles once Was just the appetizer. Now it’s like a five-course meal - And who knows if we’re wiser? For wisdom means accepting things That we cannot control; And it’s a challenge to admit That age has claimed its toll. The truly wise will slow it down And readjust their pace; For life is more a journey Than a flat-out non-stop race. If some refuse, they stand to lose; Rejecting this advice May cause more problems than they know And they will pay the price.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/19/2012 7:32:00 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and amazing writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 7:59:00 PM
So true and very good advice ilene.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages.
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Date: 4/18/2012 3:04:00 PM
Yes! I want to be the first to comment your poem!;0)Enjoyed your poem, keep up the good penning! Hugs Laila
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