Slowin' Down

Although I'm in my autumn years I still feel full of ginger.
But I'm slowin' down - my brittle bones so as not to injure!
Alas, I can't do everything that I once would choose.
It now takes a bit more effort to bend down and tie my shoes!

I can still manage to bend over and touch my toes,
And if need be could do a few pushups I suppose.
But I must take care not to strain my delicate back,
For fear I'll put the consarned thing out of whack!

I still religiously manicure my resplendent lawn,
But my zeal for keepin' it pristine is somewhat gone.
I may relinquish that onerous chore to the neighbor boy,
But those years of lovin' care I'd hate to see him destroy!

I used to carry the groceries but I seldom do that anymore
I enlist a strappin' lad to tote the bags from the grocery store.
I huff and puff climbin' stairs, so now I take the elevator,
Or if in the mall one is handy, I'll ride the escalator.

Lord, spare me the misery of livin' in a Sunshine Home, I pray!
I'll walk, I'll exercise, I'll do anything You say.
Even faithfully swallow every known vitamin from A to zinc,
Anything, dear Lord, anything to keep me in the pink!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/24/2010 6:13:00 PM
Robert~ An enchanting write that I can somewhat relate to I loved the flow of your poem and the subtle humor. I am enjoying your talent my friend! Laura :0)
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:08:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words and the info on my entry. I went ahead and submitted it. Have a good weekend, Sarge.
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Date: 4/24/2010 5:59:00 PM
Isn't old age wonderful? However it beats the alternative!
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:30:00 PM
Loved it, Bob!
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:04:00 PM
Once my gardens fed the folks from each surrounding towns, Now I plant posies and let the tomatoes plants turn brown! And even though I can still do a split, It's on the back porch I'd rather sit. A glass of red melot in my hand, the sun, the cat and me, waiting for the band! Light & Love fellow old coot!
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Date: 4/24/2010 1:01:00 PM
Well done Bob a man not ready to live asking god for extra help. hope he gives it to you . your family would love to see you in your pink color...p.d
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