Slow Poke

not even herdsmen
can gather all the pokee's
at the dinner bell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 8:27 AM
Very clever imagery... marvelous title, excellent piece! Well done Katherine! Best wishes, keith
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March 26, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Dear Katherine,Humor, vivid Imagery enticing This Great Haiku I'm sorry for not reading YOU for so long but that will change now LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 9:35 AM
A delightful, fun haiku, Katherine! Thanks for the lift!
Skinner Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 8:33 PM
Laughing,that is good,well written a few words which got a smile.That is what poetry is supposed to do ,smiles or tears.....Jim
Moreno Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 4:44 PM
Nice work Katherine, vivid image in this haiku...Raul
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