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Slow Poke

not even herdsmen can gather all the pokee's at the dinner bell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 4/4/2009 8:27:00 AM
Very clever imagery... marvelous title, excellent piece! Well done Katherine! Best wishes, keith
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Date: 3/26/2009 10:13:00 AM
Dear Katherine,Humor, vivid Imagery enticing This Great Haiku I'm sorry for not reading YOU for so long but that will change now LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:35:00 AM
A delightful, fun haiku, Katherine! Thanks for the lift!
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Date: 3/23/2009 8:33:00 PM
Laughing,that is good,well written a few words which got a smile.That is what poetry is supposed to do ,smiles or tears.....Jim
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Date: 3/23/2009 4:44:00 PM
Nice work Katherine, vivid image in this haiku...Raul
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