Slow Down

listen to the sound of the rushing world,
wonder what you'd hear if we all slowed down
a minute of an hour a second in a day 
Instead if speeding our lives away
What happens if we listen to a voice that is unheard
Would that make us different or just a bit absurd
Words are the music and in what we say
Do we still wish our lives away
Tomorrow would you slow down just for a second chance
To love someone you left behind to give them one last glance
And if you saw a gravestone of someone you held dear
Would you stop just for a second and shed a single tear
In the sounds of all the speed
Will we lose the truth that we all need
In a silence we all stare 
attending what was really there
In the hopeless hope is found
Making loud yet subtle sounds
In the future let me know
What would you do in bleeding snow
Stop and help the one you loved
Or flee the scene as an injured dove
In the furry of the fight with what is left will it be flight
Tomorrow would you stop and stare if blood washed down
Painted walls and streets around
And if you new the causer of would you wash your hands with the blood
Or would you run to a place of gold a secret place you still behold
A place where children frolic and play
A place where speed is left where it lay
A place of new adventure here
A place where newcomers all draw near
Listen to the sound of the rushing world
Would you listen or just be absurd
In what you hear does music play
Think of what it would be today
In a place where speed was left to lay
No more rushing through our life
In peace we call it calm without strife
Tomorrow may be different or just another dream
But this is the part where we place all the seams
And in a subtle laughter we may all feel absurd
But in the distant future this will be a different world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Cassady. Love, Carol
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November 19, 2010 at 6:30 PM
Thank all of you so very much for the kind words and the advice. It is very greatly apreciated. : ) -Cassady Alexa-
Taylor Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 7:29 PM
Welcome to the soup! Love your piece, you are right, rushing is overrated, we need to slow down and enjoy life as it comes. Great Work, don't forget to check out the contests on the site. Good luck!
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November 16, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write today with its entertaining theme.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv.. be blessed this happy day...
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 7:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cassady. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 15, 2010 at 6:58 PM
no need to rush, take life on day at a time enjoyed your write,..P.D.
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