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listen to the sound of the rushing world, wonder what you'd hear if we all slowed down a minute of an hour a second in a day Instead if speeding our lives away What happens if we listen to a voice that is unheard Would that make us different or just a bit absurd Words are the music and in what we say Do we still wish our lives away Tomorrow would you slow down just for a second chance To love someone you left behind to give them one last glance And if you saw a gravestone of someone you held dear Would you stop just for a second and shed a single tear In the sounds of all the speed Will we lose the truth that we all need In a silence we all stare attending what was really there In the hopeless hope is found Making loud yet subtle sounds In the future let me know What would you do in bleeding snow Stop and help the one you loved Or flee the scene as an injured dove In the furry of the fight with what is left will it be flight Tomorrow would you stop and stare if blood washed down Painted walls and streets around And if you new the causer of would you wash your hands with the blood Or would you run to a place of gold a secret place you still behold A place where children frolic and play A place where speed is left where it lay A place of new adventure here A place where newcomers all draw near Listen to the sound of the rushing world Would you listen or just be absurd In what you hear does music play Think of what it would be today In a place where speed was left to lay No more rushing through our life In peace we call it calm without strife Tomorrow may be different or just another dream But this is the part where we place all the seams And in a subtle laughter we may all feel absurd But in the distant future this will be a different world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/24/2010 9:50:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Cassady. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:30:00 PM
Thank all of you so very much for the kind words and the advice. It is very greatly apreciated. : ) -Cassady Alexa-
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Date: 11/18/2010 7:29:00 PM
Welcome to the soup! Love your piece, you are right, rushing is overrated, we need to slow down and enjoy life as it comes. Great Work, don't forget to check out the contests on the site. Good luck!
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:17:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write today with its entertaining theme.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv.. be blessed this happy day...
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:00:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cassady. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:58:00 PM
no need to rush, take life on day at a time enjoyed your write,..P.D.
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