Slow Down!

It seems that no one takes his or her time anymore,
as if they are always in a race.
Too bad, they will never appreciate the finer things 
if they do not slow down their pace.

Life is hard enough without trying to win 
so stop and take time for yourself today.
You will then realize that the true competitor
was you all along, defeated anyway.

So remember the next time you try to rush through
that no one, against you, will run.
Your life will be better, with time better spent,
as you will have time for some fun!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 10:43 AM
Gotta enjoy every moment. An honest look at life. Vince
Buys Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 3:28 PM
Wise words and so very well written. Very inspiring. Regards Heidie
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August 26, 2008 at 1:43 PM
Amen! This poem reflects my thoughts and comment on the last poem I read by you. I think most will relate to this one, an asset for any piece. Have some fun today! Karen
Reynolds Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 3:56 AM
Excellent advise (I must admit, I tend to race) thanks for this reminder, love Kristin
Christine Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 7:51 PM
Wise words. I will try to live by this advice. Inspiring poem Micheal. Anne-Marie Christine
Richards Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 12:35 PM
Such great advice, Michael. We often live at a pace, and don't take time out for what is truly important....I love that poetry, writing it, and reading what others write...helps us take time to reflect and slow down!! Great words you speak!....Best wishes..Carrie
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August 25, 2008 at 9:36 AM
hi Michael, I love this nice, light, carefree write, it reminds me of my poem simple things, it's always better to slow down and take the time to smell the roses and enjoy life, life is a complication all unto it's own, we just need to take things one day at a time, great wrtie, take care and thanks for commenting on my writes, D-nyce
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