Sloth

Sloth Languid apathy - idle gifts Hollow perfume of impotence Hoards overstuffed bags of blessings Walks by fallen stars - indolence 7-7-22 Contest: The Sin of Sloth Sponsor; Margaret Lillico

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2022 10:52:00 AM

yours is SO poetic how you met this challenge. Wow, well done

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2022 1:36:00 PM

Many thanks and much gratitude Andrea! I mentioned to Michelle that I missed one of the contest requirements so that a long poem on sloth turned into a rhyming quatrain! Whew! Glad you liked it! Fun challenge to get the intricate and complicated concept of sloth into four, rhyming lines! Take care. Enjoy your summer sunshine! Blessings!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/8/2022 10:07:00 AM

Love your word choices here, Sam, especially 'hollow perfume of impotence' - so descriptive! Best wishes for the contest~

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/8/2022 1:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Michelle! I didn't read all the of the contest requirements and wrote a long poem on sloth. Had to quickly condense and pull out my favorite lines! I'm so glad they make sense and that you liked the result! Very grateful my friend for your visit and your best wishes! It was an interesting topic! Blessings of summer sunshine to you from one northwesterner to another!