Slope




              she went down the slope
               her mind in rapid decline
                  my old friend is gone


Heidi Sands

7/9/24

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Kim Rodrigues

July 24, 2024 at 5:59 PM

A sad one…great imagery.

Heidi Sands

July 25, 2024 at 5:48 AM

Thank you Kim

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 23, 2024 at 3:49 PM

Hello Heidi, oh, so sad to hear this about your friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 24, 2024 at 4:54 PM

Heidsi you are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

July 24, 2024 at 1:41 PM

Thank you Darlene . Hugs :)

Quoth Theraven

July 15, 2024 at 10:24 PM

Heidi, This aptly named poem haunts me. Still, unique in the wide world and I find it compelling. Like a magnet pointing ever to the sunrise. -Richard

Heidi Sands

July 16, 2024 at 12:51 PM

Thank you for your feedback Richard. The situation is quite haunting. I hope you are well. It is great to hear from you :)