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she went down the slope her mind in rapid decline my old friend is gone Heidi Sands 7/9/24 (C)opyright

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Date: 7/24/2024 5:59:00 PM
A sad one…great imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/25/2024 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 7/23/2024 3:49:00 PM
Hello Heidi, oh, so sad to hear this about your friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2024 4:54:00 PM
Heidsi you are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/24/2024 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Darlene . Hugs :)
Date: 7/15/2024 10:24:00 PM
Heidi, This aptly named poem haunts me. Still, unique in the wide world and I find it compelling. Like a magnet pointing ever to the sunrise. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2024 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for your feedback Richard. The situation is quite haunting. I hope you are well. It is great to hear from you :)
Date: 7/11/2024 7:58:00 PM
Ouch. Those slopes are so slippery. Condolences... but fond memories too...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2024 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 7/10/2024 4:26:00 AM
Heidi, your haiku perfectly expresses in just a few words a sad demise! I hope you have been well!! Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2024 5:27:00 AM
Hi Mike. Thank you very much . I am doing well. Happy Wednesday :)
Date: 7/9/2024 11:27:00 PM
Aw so sad
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2024 5:26:00 AM
Yes, very. Thank you Karen.

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