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“Slips the Blue Satine” Desire bites a sonnet ripped where the voice projects through glossy cherry bit lips down a telephone line wrapped around long legs speaking soft words welcoming you in like a quilled whip Freedom bites a too serious sonnet smiles then progresses to apply velveteen kisses where the lips tie a loose noose of words like pearls around the sound conduit curbing the mind whispering to soft curves, a roadmap written across body eyelids, flushed naked cheeks neck down to hips where the key turns poetry speaks blood drawn the heart has teeth Gaga’s gone all evolutionary too much of too much she denudes the blue Satine easily divesting all hopelessness of the hounds barking their haranguing hangdog habits superlatives exaggerated hyperbolical expressions of praise blessed again in the wasted chronicles of time her hand’s firmly fixed around the gear stick stilettos accelerate sharp instructions from the driver’s seat switching gears up behind the fortune wheel treasure sits “pull your head back in”, she says “the Lotus Eaters at Loon Junction are on the prowl, they’ll tear you to bits”. "humour me," he says, "let me off my leash". (LadyLabyrinth/2021) “Small Town Witch”/ Sneaker Pimps https://youtu.be/M6zh5rAlZ18 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Velveteen_Rabbit Sonnet 106. The Dilettante Diaries: "Goin' Gangsta on the Road to The Lotus Eaters at Loon Junction" - https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_dilettante_diaries_goin_gangsta_on_the_road_to_the_lotus_eaters_at_loon_junction_1059240 LYRICS/"Small Town Witch", Sneaker Pimps https://genius.com/Sneaker-pimps-small-town-witch-lyrics

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Date: 6/9/2021 8:10:00 AM
Wow...imagery fashion...Love the style...Congratulations Lady Labyrinth on POTD.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/9/2021 4:38:00 PM
Merci Bar Coop (from the chicken coup), Monsieur. x
Date: 6/6/2021 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTD award. Yet another truly wonderful free verse from your golden pen.. Definitely a fav... God bless...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/7/2021 10:30:00 AM
The Lotus Eaters cried foul- world is full of cheaters That only circuses of free-ranging freedom can relieve Draw ever closer to fireplace or your modern heaters Else in this terrible world your own blindness shall deceive. Yes, sometimes verses just demand to be inked... n'est-ce pas?
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/6/2021 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Monsieur Lindley.
Date: 6/6/2021 10:55:00 AM
Lady Labyrinth. beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/6/2021 2:37:00 PM
Merci Madama La France.
Date: 6/6/2021 9:26:00 AM
An inviting piece where all the directions lead home...a fitting piece to showcase your talents Modesty... brava
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/6/2021 2:38:00 PM
Danke schön V.S.A.S.
Date: 6/6/2021 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your potd win. A creative story/write. Love your line, "poetry speaks" and it does. Have a blessed day/week.......................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/6/2021 2:39:00 PM
Indeed Contessa Goldsmith. Thank you.
Date: 6/6/2021 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations on potd! Enjoy the honour!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/6/2021 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Rama.
Date: 6/5/2021 7:15:00 PM
Language is a Virus.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/5/2021 7:19:00 PM
https://youtu.be/h2B406WiyKQ
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/5/2021 7:16:00 PM
LYRICS/ https://genius.com/Laurie-anderson-language-is-a-virus-lyrics
Date: 6/5/2021 6:25:00 PM
You make the poetry speak as the blue satine is dropped to the floor. A very sensual and wonderful poem Leanne! A definite fave
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/5/2021 7:15:00 PM
language is a virus...sings Laurie Anderson. Thanks Swartzmeister.
Date: 6/5/2021 1:53:00 PM
Licking Life's Luscious Lips.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/5/2021 1:53:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/licking_lifes_luscious_lips_1288730

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