Slippery With Notes
+++++++++++++++++ SLIPPERY
Three ice covered rocks
sure footing is not assured
balance is the key
GINSU - KNIFE EASTPORT , MAINE USA
Notes : My sister wanted to know more about this poem.
What did it mean , if anything? She thought it sounded simplistic.
But she knows me and some of my facets , nuances and quirks.
Etc. So , OK , Anne in Ocala , Florida , here you go.
Three icy rocks Childhood , adolescence and adulthood.
Sure footing not assured No guarantees in this world.
Lots of forces at play. Best to pay attention.
Balance Not always easy to stay upright. Even with our best efforts
So thats a little about this poem.
Yes perhaps more to discuss.... perhaps not.
Glad to listen to others on this one. Im just a scrawler.
And Ill buy you a coffee at the diner if you make it to Eastport , Maine.
Patrick March 4 2021
Copyright © Patrick Mehr | Year Posted 2021
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