Sling Shot Tree

Flitering light through Forest, dark moss clings to rocks Sling shot v tree

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/10/2009 12:39:00 PM

I love that you can totally picture this! I can definitely see the dark moss!

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2009 12:50:00 PM

Super Haiku Sara>>James

Abraham L

Date: 9/4/2009 8:25:00 AM

thanks for your comments, and this one catches the eye

Brian Strand

Date: 9/2/2009 11:42:00 PM

Best wishes with this one Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/2/2009 5:07:00 PM

Poised haiku. Thank u for you comment on my poem

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/2/2009 3:00:00 PM

is this a walk in the woods? nice job. On the poem once a month it is me putting flea meds on ashley hiding under the table.

Ana Victoria Perez

Date: 9/2/2009 2:57:00 PM

love the haiku. thanks for the post on my poem. hope to get more from you.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/2/2009 2:50:00 PM

Beautiful thoughts coming from that poetic head!! Regard and best of luck: Déirdre

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/2/2009 2:05:00 PM

gorgeous! Sara! jim

Danny Nunn

Date: 9/2/2009 7:17:00 AM

Good write Danny

John Tanaskow

Date: 9/2/2009 6:45:00 AM

it is a nice picture. and thank you for all your comments