Sling Shot Tree

Flitering light through
Forest, dark moss clings to rocks
Sling shot v  tree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Augustus Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 12:39 PM
I love that you can totally picture this! I can definitely see the dark moss!
Fraser Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Super Haiku Sara>>James
L Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 8:25 AM
thanks for your comments, and this one catches the eye
Strand Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Best wishes with this one Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Shahwan Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Poised haiku. Thank u for you comment on my poem
Culverhouse Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:00 PM
is this a walk in the woods? nice job. On the poem once a month it is me putting flea meds on ashley hiding under the table.
Perez Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 2:57 PM
love the haiku. thanks for the post on my poem. hope to get more from you.
Omaidin Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Beautiful thoughts coming from that poetic head!! Regard and best of luck: Déirdre
Goff Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 2:05 PM
gorgeous! Sara! jim
Nunn Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Good write Danny
Tanaskow Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 6:45 AM
it is a nice picture. and thank you for all your comments
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