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Contest: Nursery Rhyme          Sponsor: Eve Roper

14 December 2023

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Slimy Or Spiny

Two little kittens and a very big dog
Gazed at the creature that was sitting on a log
It looked a little slimy and it really wasn’t spiny 
So, you can’t mistake a bullfrog for a hedgehog…
No, you can’t mistake a bullfrog for a hedgehog.

One little kitten said, “Please tell me who you are.”
The creature said, “The question that you ask me is bizarre,
For one lives under bushes and the other in a bog,
So, you can’t mistake a bullfrog for a hedgehog….
No, you can’t mistake a bullfrog for a hedgehog.”

The dog said, “Well I’m still not sure, could you remind me please?”
The creature said, “My skin is green and I cannot get fleas,
So though I do eat worms and slugs by moonlight or in fog,
You can’t mistake a bullfrog for a hedgehog…
No, you can’t mistake a bullfrog for a hedgehog.”

The other kitten said, “Did you come from a witch’s wand?”
A hedgehog yelled, “His skin has warts from living in a pond,
I saw him hop this morning from the pond across the road,
And you can’t mistake a hedgehog for a toad…
No, you can’t mistake a hedgehog for a toad!”
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Roper Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 10:08 PM
Terry, congratulations on your win. Great story. Have a Merry Christmas.
Fowler Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Read it twice. Laughed the first time, laughed more the second time. Still laughing as I write this comment. Congratulations Terry! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Slimy Or Spiny" is a creative/cute Nursery Rhyme write/story. Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................
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December 16, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Another beauty Terry! Debx
Brotherton Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 2:04 PM
A hilarious nursery rhymes my friend. A sure fired winner for sure.
Cunningham Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 9:06 PM
A lovely story for kids Terry, if it's for Eve's contest, good luck. I remember years ago when I was in Mauritius and it was the bullfrog mating season and all you could hear was this tremendous roar. Tom
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