Slim Pickings

A waning moon hangs
under an obsidian sky
as I walk through a 
the dark scrub  forest
past stumps of giants
felled long ago.

The river‘s low 
few salmon in the pools
and none flounder
on the gravel banks. 
Eagles and ravens 
are not to be seen
though the signs say 
bears have been 
sighted.

Once this river sustained
an autumn feast but
now pickings
are pretty
slim.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Vivid imagery and splendid phrasing! The detail you bring to your river surroundings is exceptional. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Rodgers Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Thanks Keith
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