Slim Jim

There once a guy whose name was slim Jim He had a best friend called little Tim Two peas in a pod Slim owned a hot rod He wasn’t thin; hadn’t stepped foot in a gym Alexis Y. 05/10/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/16/2021 10:02:00 AM

Alexis you are so good with limericks, I enjoy writing them sometimes also, you can have real fun with them, this one is funny. Well penned my friend, Hugs and love, Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/11/2021 12:17:00 PM

Slim Jim was/is a greasy sausage, so could easily slip in and out of a gym, with or without the hymn ....Aloha! Rico

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/11/2021 8:01:00 AM

Another hilarious limerick, Alexis! Thanks for the morning eye tickler, sis. Cool poem fo' sho'. Love and more love always.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2021 2:26:00 AM

Hi Alexis, nice to see you back with a lovely limerick; that's really funny, but the rhythm and sounds make it even better; thanks for sharing, hugs, and have a great day

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2021 10:58:00 PM

Just fun, Alexis. Love limericks. Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/10/2021 7:31:00 PM

Fantastic Limerick Alexis… Slim Jim and his best friend called little Tim - Decided one day to try out the gym - They both found it grim - Hurt in every limb - Then went to the pub to mend their chagrin.… Belle