Alexis Y. Poet Limerick

Slim Jim

There once a guy whose name was slim Jim
     He had a best friend called little Tim
               Two peas in a pod
             Slim owned a hot rod
He wasn’t thin; hadn’t stepped foot in a gym












Alexis Y.
05/10/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos May 16, 2021 at 10:02 AM Alexis you are so good with limericks, I enjoy writing them sometimes also, you can have real fun with them, this one is funny. Well penned my friend, Hugs and love, Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta May 11, 2021 at 12:17 PM Slim Jim was/is a greasy sausage, so could easily slip in and out of a gym, with or without the hymn ....Aloha! Rico

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 11, 2021 at 8:01 AM Another hilarious limerick, Alexis! Thanks for the morning eye tickler, sis. Cool poem fo' sho'. Love and more love always.

Sotto Poet May 11, 2021 at 2:26 AM Hi Alexis, nice to see you back with a lovely limerick; that's really funny, but the rhythm and sounds make it even better; thanks for sharing, hugs, and have a great day

Victor Buhagiar May 10, 2021 at 10:58 PM Just fun, Alexis. Love limericks. Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds May 10, 2021 at 7:31 PM Fantastic Limerick Alexis… Slim Jim and his best friend called little Tim - Decided one day to try out the gym - They both found it grim - Hurt in every limb - Then went to the pub to mend their chagrin.… Belle