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Slight of Wing

a cloud of starlings flew and flowed fluidly being something from nothing to something as dark as ink making me think if i were a bird of prey my eyes i wouldn't blink couldn't blink if to catch anything as this magic cloud moves without wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/9/2019 7:41:00 PM
vivid imagery gives a good visual through your words... i can see them flying by... :)
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/9/2019 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I got out of my car at work this morning and there they were. That wonderful flock that seems an illusion.

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