Slideshow

There’s a beautiful slideshow in the sky As the clouds move slowly, passing by Flirting on and off, shines the sun Illuminating pictures, one by one Snowcapped mountains shining bright With a backdrop of blue, glistening white It’s a beautiful slideshow to watch today As light interacts with views, on my way Heidi Sands 3/16/19

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 3:43:00 AM

Your imagery is so lovely it is easy to visualize this gorgeous scene Heidi xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2019 8:58:00 AM

Thank you Connie. I was fortunate enough to see some beautiful sights :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/16/2019 4:31:00 PM

I always find clouds in the sky make for a more interesting and beautiful picture and your poem is so enticing with the snowcapped mountains as a backdrop, so through your poem I can see this stunning scene for myself - thank you Heidi with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank you very much Ann, it was quite the sight to see today :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/16/2019 3:35:00 PM

ohh heidi , you entice with by your brilliant sky parade!...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Nette, it was going in and out of the light and the mountain top with snow was brighter than I have ever seen, when the sun came out from behind the clouds. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/16/2019 3:07:00 PM

Excellent imagery in your poem and a very pleasant write..enjoyed the sideshow.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2019 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/16/2019 2:10:00 PM

Always a wonderful slideshow, they never fail to enthrall...

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2019 2:17:00 PM

Yes, it was a wonderful one today, with the light shining on and off the mountain. I took some nice photos too. Thank you Charlie :) Have a nice day.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2019 11:12:00 AM

Heidi, the clouds really do provide a slide show of sorts and the pictures change as the clouds' formations alter. Quite a beautiful slideshow you share with the reader! Best wishes, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2019 11:43:00 AM

Yes they do. Today they were passing and then the sun would shine and light up the snow on the mountain, in and out. Thank you Carolyn :)