Slides and Stairways

Somewhere in the pretty petty imaginary illusion of delusion
There lies a truth an edifice of search between obtuse confusion

Windows like brick walls and concrete blocks birthing the light
Nails to be nailed screws to be screwed with monumental sight

A life a building fortress sand castle beach hut nutter’s dream
Maybe a prison with towers barbed wire fences mindful scream

Some multi storied paradise no choke on apple’s stem or core
No passion fruit in torture chambers shackles behind and to the fore

No hidden attic and no cellar no stellar fantasy no quick descent
For now simply one dimension deserted plain hopes to ferment

Scraping no skies a cave hovel card board box a bombed out grave
Nothing to hold onto no graces left spent and ravished naught to save

Is it magic thought provoked delusion of illusion alluded distortion
Who knows does it matter I suppose it does in incomplete reapportion 

Some are born in a manger on the fields of labour some with a silver spoon
Surely some would rather have foundations a ceiling not some lonely moon

Get me not wrong as singing the praises of romantic poverty and dearth
Icy cold and freezing bones do not bear up to sound safe privilege in birth

Yet from the scraping nib and luxury of pen in hand and philosophic mind
Not wishing to lack compassion nor cementing over cracks so misaligned

We are the builders of our lives to some extent despite the vagaries so vast
Can we find a staircase upwards some sliding pole to reach out for the past

In such compassion regardless of painful structures and abandoned need
Is some notion some motion of change and nourishment star dust to feed

In God we trust nihilism architecture Karma fate Nirvana hard core grind?
No valid answers but questions loving search for quiet mindfulness in kind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/29/2018 7:07:00 AM
I can't just skim over this, as withnlight poetry. You write with intelligence, and this poem has depth. I'm coming back when I'll have time to ficus.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/30/2018 2:12:00 AM
Thank you for visiting Hannah.
Date: 3/29/2018 4:45:00 AM
Oh my Easter weekend! A M A Z I N G poem. Your word choices are impeccably chosen. I am sitting here Re-reading this, stunned by this poem power.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/30/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and for your compliment. Kai
Date: 3/24/2018 10:11:00 AM
GREAT poetry, Kai!! Your acrobatic linguistic grace on the existentialism trapeze is a marvel to behold. Such cerebral dexterity and visceral clarity. A masterpiece from beginning to end. And the memorable string of pearls phrases astounds ... No hidden attic and no cellar no stellar fantasy no quick descent. For now simply one dimension deserted plain hopes to ferment. You are a master poet laureate, my talented friend. Love and much respect always. Romantic Warrior
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 3/24/2018 10:15:00 AM
Btw ... was listening to the cool jazz classic, "Listen to the Wind" by Chuck Mangione while reading this mesmerizing poem. Love and peace forever. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltL1Z3WYCog
Date: 3/21/2018 3:25:00 AM
Thank you Nette and hugs back to you. And thanks for reading more than once.
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Date: 3/20/2018 2:23:00 PM
mind-boggling thoughts which make this piece worth another read, kai..huggs
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/21/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thank you Nette and hugs back to you. And thanks for reading more than once.
Date: 3/20/2018 11:54:00 AM
Very powerful, and inspirational, check me out https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/never_mind_what_we_believe_1005339 Thank you most graciously... Mick
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Date: 3/20/2018 10:35:00 AM
Your title is poetic and metaphoric too ... a deep write ... will read again ... thought provoking ...
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Date: 3/20/2018 6:06:00 AM
I was stirred particularly by the couplet next to next to last...the vagaries of the past and a possible fireman's pole to reach them. I'm thinking a possible return to reverse the negative vibes which affect our current behavior and emotion. I also like the second pair of couplets.
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