Probir Gupta Poet Tanka

Slices of Splash

For a slice of splash
From the yellow and green sky
Through a chance window
Both you and I lie in wait
Sands of our blue time restless 
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20/10/2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 28, 2016 at 2:29 PM Very visually romantic poem, Probir. I love this one, putting it in my fave. Love always to you. RW Probir Gupta October 28, 2016 at 11:46 PM Thank you so much ...

Rizwana Bhurani October 21, 2016 at 10:58 AM Beautifully expressed tanka.... enjoyed reading....thanks for dropping by.. Probir Gupta October 22, 2016 at 1:06 AM Thank you ...

Afzal Nusker October 20, 2016 at 11:13 PM Wow, you really painted the canvas of your poetry with pretty colorful words. A 7 Probir Gupta October 21, 2016 at 4:57 AM Thank you

Paloma P October 20, 2016 at 5:21 PM Amazing Probir, you paint with broad strokes. 'blue time restless', that sums it up nicely. Love the title too. Probir Gupta October 21, 2016 at 4:58 AM Thank you so much ...

Nette Onclaud October 20, 2016 at 12:11 PM tugging at the heartstrings, probir.. so charmingly written..huggs Probir Gupta October 21, 2016 at 4:59 AM ha ha ... thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis October 20, 2016 at 5:54 AM Your Tanka is not a slice but the whole sky of romance dear, Probir! A seven! Probir Gupta October 20, 2016 at 7:13 AM Depends upon who is reading ... to some like you the entire sky ... to some other moment fry ! ... thank you ...

White Wolf October 19, 2016 at 10:24 PM Great tanka Probir, I just did my first thanks to you. It's an interesting form. /|\ Probir Gupta October 19, 2016 at 10:29 PM You may read my reply to Paloma's comments also to my preceding tanka Window ... Thank you ...