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Sleepy Trees

the trees are yawning, carelessly shedding their clothes for sweet winter sleep like spoiled children who know well daddy will clean up their mess

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/30/2013 12:20:00 PM
well done Tim ....love <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:20:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Tim
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:21:00 AM
This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win
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Date: 10/26/2013 9:22:00 PM
Tim, thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~
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Date: 11/2/2012 2:47:00 PM
Absolutely charming! Love it. :) Tanya
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:26:00 PM
It so deserved to be on top ten!! Congrats!
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:22:00 PM
Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 12:05:00 AM
CONGRATS TIM ON AN INCREDIBLE WRITE AND WIN LUV .. AWESOME WORK .. GO SAINTS .. I AM ROOTING FOR THEM AS WELL AS MY GIANTS ..
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Date: 10/23/2012 6:56:00 PM
Isn't that the truth!! Only at my house, it is mommy too that has to haul out the rake........and we have heaps to sweep up!! Delightful poem, Tim!
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Date: 10/23/2012 6:49:00 PM
TIM, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD
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Date: 10/23/2012 6:59:00 AM
hahaha, love the comparison to daddy cleaning up those messy leaves! Very fun one.
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:06:00 PM
HELLO, TIM,,, I'M BACK AFTER DOUBLE VISITING MY MOM :-(... ABOUT YOUR POEM... LOVE IT...XOX~PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 6:55:00 PM
Really creative wording, each line has a unique message and the whole poem is alive with a wonderful picture of autumn!
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Date: 10/14/2012 10:53:00 AM
A nice autumn poem to contest Tim, wish you good luck - hope you win. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:58:00 AM
WOW!! Love it really!
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:49:00 AM
This is great Tim. A new slant on that ole autumn theme. Very original.
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