Sleepy Soul

indigo has fallen
upon my lovely petunias
they are patiently waiting
because they do love the sun
quiet calm has fallen upon my heart
the gossamer winged angels
are patiently waiting to
astound me,surround me
guide me to dreamland
meanwhile the night and i
carry on like lovers
caught up in an endless dance
a fine romance till
sleep
do
us
part
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/9/2010 5:32:00 PM
this was a very creative and wonderful piece to read, glad i had time to scroll over the features this week. congratulation, this is a great piece of art. --Madison
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on homepage feature this week..Enjoyed reading your creative write..Sara
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:31:00 AM
congratulations on your well-deserved feature this week. Well done!
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:00:00 AM
I like the fantasia in this one, the wistful. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:01:00 PM
really like the way you have depicted the brevity of life with strong images ...liked the way you interwined methaphysical elements with transitory earthy lives .. a strong sense of melancholy pervades all throughout the poem though with little remorses...
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:41:00 AM
Till sleep do us part ... sigh they are some really wonderful end words congrates on being featured this week Deb I enjoyed this one smile ... love Jayne
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Date: 10/3/2010 9:11:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:10:00 PM
Wow, I feel like I just read a painting... great imagery.
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