Billie Jama Poet Haiku

Sleepy Mountains

                             
                    snow 
                d u s t e d
                        t
                     n  a
                  u        i
               o             n
            m                  s          
          nestled sleepily 
               amongst~
        verdant cul-de-sac

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thriveni c mysore May 7, 2025 at 9:16 PM Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Ink Empress May 7, 2025 at 1:33 AM Such a pretty shape sis! How creatively youv presented this very picturesque hiku! Exquisite! I love especially " snow dusted" ah! Wordplay here is brilliant! Absolutely loved reading this one! Congratulations on your well deserved top win too! Billie Jama May 7, 2025 at 4:35 AM Awe thanks Ink. It was a good outlet for my creativity. Congratulations on you winning piece also

Lin Lane May 7, 2025 at 12:07 AM Weaving poetry into shape... very adroit of you, Billie ;-) Billie Jama May 7, 2025 at 12:35 AM Haha, just a to spice up a haiku and have a little fun

Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2025 at 3:42 PM Lovely and fun shape! Billie Jama May 7, 2025 at 12:32 AM Thanks : )