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Sleepy Dreams

As she smiled
Curtains closed
On her past

As he smiled
The sun rose
In shadows

As they smiled
Sleepy dreams
Awakened

©1/23/2023

Tricube Poetry Contest

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Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2023 at 6:36 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem -

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2023 at 4:57 AM

Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

January 29, 2023 at 9:24 PM

Smiling together. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

January 25, 2023 at 7:44 AM

John, this poetry is so subtle and deep. There are several thoughts and images that spring to mind. Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for your comment on my page.

Susan Lawrence

January 24, 2023 at 1:08 PM

Love the mystery and nuance in this poem dear John ! so many thoughts and images reveal themselves! Best of luck in the contest . Susan :)

Susan Ashley

January 23, 2023 at 7:39 PM

Dear John, I adore the dreamy spirit of your poem. Lovely alluring brevity with lots of room for my heart's imagination to roam. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner

January 23, 2023 at 7:38 PM

A touch mysterious, and I like the ways you show the difference in their dreams, hope it does well for you~

Regina Mcintosh

January 23, 2023 at 1:22 PM

Love this. Beautiful inspirations. God bless you kind friend. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 23, 2023 at 12:56 PM

- A lovely one for this contest, John ... best wishes :) - (Always exciting to read other people's suggestions...I was a little unsure if I did it right) -

Sleepy Dreams

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