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Sleepy Dreams

As she smiled Curtains closed On her past As he smiled The sun rose In shadows As they smiled Sleepy dreams Awakened ©1/23/2023 Tricube Poetry Contest

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 6:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem -

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2023 4:57:00 AM

Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 9:24:00 PM

Smiling together. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/25/2023 7:44:00 AM

John, this poetry is so subtle and deep. There are several thoughts and images that spring to mind. Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for your comment on my page.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/24/2023 1:08:00 PM

Love the mystery and nuance in this poem dear John ! so many thoughts and images reveal themselves! Best of luck in the contest . Susan :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/23/2023 7:39:00 PM

Dear John, I adore the dreamy spirit of your poem. Lovely alluring brevity with lots of room for my heart's imagination to roam. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/23/2023 7:38:00 PM

A touch mysterious, and I like the ways you show the difference in their dreams, hope it does well for you~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/23/2023 1:22:00 PM

Love this. Beautiful inspirations. God bless you kind friend. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2023 12:56:00 PM

- A lovely one for this contest, John ... best wishes :) - (Always exciting to read other people's suggestions...I was a little unsure if I did it right) -