Sleepwalking

Existing in chaos, mind’s fog
World of haze, devoid of color
Mindless drone, autopilot
Going through the motions as if
Sleepwalking
Through the dense gloom, the gray horizon seen
In a daze, the cold emptiness never ending
Sleepwalking by day
Existing only to find solace at twilight
Overindulgence, ceasing the chatter, ceasing the noise
Sleepwalking, hoping to one day awaken from this prison
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Kaya Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Thank you Susan! Uhhmm, I want to try this because you wrote about Diamond Head. ------------------------------------------------ Pidgin: Whoa, I went read yo da kine, "A Diamond Head Sunrise" and da buggah stay cherry brah! ----------------------------------------------- Translation for anyone that doesn't understand Pidgin: I read your poem "A Diamond Head Sunrise" and I really liked it!
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Well done Byron, I think the first time reading you, will not be the last I'm sure, congrats on a fine win!
Kaya Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Thank you!
Kaya Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Thank you!
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