Sleepwalk

As the twinkling stars clung
to the ceiling of earth
they glittered as darkness
gave way to new birth

Fireflies flickered
and danced through the trees
as the rippling brook
made its journey with ease;

tripping and bubbling
o'er stones on its way
anxious for oceans
too eager to stay

The blue mist arose
and met up with the sky
as the creatures stood silent
to watch me walk by

With heart in contentment
my footsteps were light
aimlessly wandering 
on through the night

Where was I going
and what lie ahead?
My sleepwalking soon 
took me back to my bed...

...and resuming my slumber
with memories so sweet
the night in the forest
made dreaming complete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/25/2017 9:52:00 AM
I just love the cadence of your rhyming poems. They flow so smoothly and always have a song like quality to them. You must have a melody in your mind as you write. I also loved the storyline and how you ended it. That was perfect. This was very well written Gayle.
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thanks! I do think one can trip over the words as a runaway rhythm can tend to do that! (I'm gonna write one about that too! ;p )
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