Sleepless Nights

I've had quite a few of them days, those endless sleepless nights. Not because of stress or drugs, or loving couple fights. But something just happens when I turn out the lights, my mind won't shut down? It suddenly ignites In a flurry of different thoughts, Some new but yet some old. "You need to shut it down!" is what I have been told. "Think of closing a book" But as the story goes I'll just think of something else, like how many pages might have folds? My brain will not shut down! Though I continue to try. So many sleepless nights I've spent, checking the clock as time ticks by. All I can do is roll back over with a long disgusted sigh. Living with a brain that won't shut down, just makes me want to cry! There's something I haven't tried? Maybe I can cry myself to sleep? Now all I have to do is, think of something deep. Thinking deeper thoughts, of what will make me weep. Just another sleepless night, before I hear that alarm clock beep.
7-3-13 Contest: Sleepless Nights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/14/2013 9:19:00 PM
You have almost sketched the feelings of a restless mind in this beautiful writes my friend. The real beauty of this Poem lies in its simplicity which conveys deep struggles of mind. Congrats for a well deserving win and thank you for your precious words on my Poem. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2013 8:03:00 AM
I can relate Dan. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2013 10:14:00 PM
My huge heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Dan.It’s an outstanding poem indeed which really deserved its shining win. Thank you so much for giving me your precious gem in my contest and for your support. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2013 3:56:00 AM
Ooooooh awesome write Dan Man.....good luck with the contest!!!!! Shaz
Login to Reply
Date: 7/4/2013 12:26:00 AM
"tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2013 12:25:00 PM
being a night person, t can resonate with the mood and tenor of this beautiful piece... amazed, as always, dan!..:)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2013 5:35:00 AM
I can relate to your poem.I used to.experience lots of sleepless nights in my teens.Sometimes i used to be scared too..It lasted till my mid twenties..Then one night i was thinking how many people are at work yearning to be instead of me in my bed and sleeping.I started thinking of beautiful things and i started sleeping like a baby.Nowadays i pity those nights i ve missed.Enjoyed reading your poem.as always Dan
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2013 3:55:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece.. I totally love hoe u expressed yourself. Best one I've heard so far for that contest.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad