Sleepless

sleep is what I need so tired of not sleeping wish I could just sleep

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/13/2023 4:53:00 AM

I can truly resonate with this haiku poem as I've too, seen very close ones suffer and deal with repercussions. Insomnia or sleep troubles are truly so exhausting and also give way to anxiety. As Ink said, yes, it's a blessing that those struggling with it can understand.. Wonderfully crafted this is , dear Karen..

Karen Croft
Date: 12/13/2023 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, and thanks for reading

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2023 1:22:00 AM

I know and empathise with individuals that struggle to sleep. Whilst some don’t realise, sleep is a blessing for some, an unattainable task .. iv seen loved ones struggle. Take melatonin helps . I usually take one if i cant sleep at all. Sending you light always

Karen Croft
Date: 12/13/2023 1:59:00 AM

Thank you. I have tried 5mg of melatonin and nothing, so I took 10mg and 6 hours later I am about falling asleep in church!