Carrie Richards Poet Rhyme

Sleeping Child (Eap:)

She tiptoes to his bed to peek:
   In the room so sweet, no words could speak
   As the child she loves so soundly sleeps
   And the moon beyond the window creeps
   With the moonlight kissing baby cheeks

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Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2010 at 7:18 AM A cutie poem from you! Good rhyming in it! Luv, Andrea

Matthew Miles January 22, 2010 at 9:39 AM So smooth & lovely. The feel of the poem reflects the sentiment. Beautiful read. Thank you, Matt. <3

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 17, 2010 at 8:21 AM this would do well for a children's book of verses :) could see a picture that could do well with this :) lovely write!

Gerard Keogh Jr. January 13, 2010 at 10:40 AM Miss Carrie, a very good job in a minor key. Solid. Thank you, as always, yo are very kind and affable. I appreciate it! Regards, Gerard.

Constance La France January 13, 2010 at 9:53 AM This poem is a tribute for your love of this child. Written from your soul. I wish you success in the contest. And thanks from the bottom of my heart, for your kind comment on my poem, It's Very Simple Really, a poem about writing. God Bless.

Brian Strand January 13, 2010 at 8:05 AM Carrie ,thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse January 13, 2010 at 8:00 AM so cute!! I am still trying to come up with a poem for this contest. Good luck. sounds like a winner!!

Carol Sunshine Brown January 13, 2010 at 7:00 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly January 13, 2010 at 2:52 AM Great picture , you painted here , Carrie and is already a winner ..... zzzzzz ..

Elaine George January 13, 2010 at 2:20 AM Yet this poem speaks vollumes. Very touching and endearing, Carrie. Love,lainie