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Sleeping Child

long lashes of sleep the sentry of a child’s dreams — counts diurnal gold 2/18/2018

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Date: 2/22/2018 1:12:00 PM
This is true gold! I love the line 'sentry of a child's dream' as if the lashes bar and keep them inside. Great poem Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gayle! You get it!
Date: 2/18/2018 5:10:00 PM
Perhaps the child's daily events were too much.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2018 6:20:00 PM
More about the absorption of the day’s activities, meting out knowledge. :)

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