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Premiere Contest WinnerSleeping Beauty - Once Upon a Time


Let me tell you a story . . .

     It happened long ago and once upon a time in an enchanted forest,
This is the story of Sleeping Beauty of the Woods, but not the Grimm tale;
          of your childhood, oh no, this one is completely but not totally different.

Now, the King of the woods, King Wind and the Queen, Queen Rain,
     Had a beautiful girl child and she was known as Princess Nature;
          She had seven fairy godmothers, there was Wit, fairy of changing skies,
Grace, of rippling streams, Dance, of falling leaves, Song, of the birds, and;
     Music, of each new dawn, and of course there was Night, of dreams,
                And the last fairy was called Magic . . . 
  Oh I forgot, there was an eighth fairy, an evil one, called Winter.

That evil fairy, Winter was so jealous and mean that she cast an enchantment,
     On Princess Nature, that should she prick her finger on a thorn;
         She would die, but the seventh fairy, Magic reversed the curse somehow,
The Princess would not die should she prick her finger but fall asleep;
     Asleep for one hundred years, and could only be awakened by a certain kiss.

The woods was a lovely place of emerald green and hanging mosses,
     but also there were places of brambles and thorns, and one day, sadly;
        Princess Nature pricked her finger on a thorn and fell into a deep sleep.
The woods became quiet and nothing moved, winter and frost came;
     It covered everything and the woods froze for one hundred years.

Then a Prince came through the tall trees, he had heard of these woods,
     Heard the story of the sleeping Princess, and his name was Prince Spring;
He cut through the ice with his sun sword and soon found the Princess,
          Kneeling he kissed her and she awakened and the woods awakened too. 

               And of course, they married, and lived happily ever after...

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January 27, 2016

Poetry/Narrative/Sleeping Beauty - Once Upon A Time
Copyright Protected, ID 16-749-715-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Your best Poem From Any Laura Loo Contest
Sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place 

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Written for the contest, Once Upon A Time, 
sponsor, Laura Loo

Second Place
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Scars Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Broken Wings, you stole my heart the first time and did it again-beautiful story told here and congratulations on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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February 9, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Love it well done x
La France Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Wendy, thanks for the love and the compliment !
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! :-)
La France Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate ~
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February 7, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Anytime
Wigley Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Well done, BW, a lovely piece. Viv x
La France Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Viv, thanks for the compliment and the lovely !
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Thanks for the reply
La France Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Your Welcome
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February 6, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, the wonderful and the Luv ~
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Wonderful take and beautifully written poem, BW. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, hugs to you too !
May Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Congrats on a fine win
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Joseph, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate !
Onclaud Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:25 AM
enchanting story well told, constance.. super congrats on your fine spot!..huggs
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:52 PM
nette, thanks for the congrats and the enchanting and hugs !
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and the hugs XX
Scars Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Broken Wings, thank you very much for being apart of my contest, the last stanza was awesome :)-luloo *smiles*
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Laura, thank you for the great inspiration and for my awesome placement, it was fun to write a fairy tale in a different way !
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Broken Wing, I love your theme of the Once Upon A Time tale. a 7 Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Eve, thank you for visiting my poem and for the love, the 7 and the hugs!!!
Callus Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:45 PM
So lovely and entertaining, Constance! Your imagination and creativity had a field day:) To be honest I prefer your take to the original, perhaps because it's more poetically orientated. ~ paul
La France Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Paul, thank you for visiting my poem and for the lovely comment, I am so grateful for that ~
Inman Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Love your tale, BW. Especially like the names, they fit the characters really well.
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM
James thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
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January 28, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Congrat.To live in a fairy tale... Mihail Sadoveanu has a wonderful and touching story called Fancy`s Fairy (building roman ,thus told in other story called Wonderful Grove) in which a Prince looks for her all his life. He met her once (when he had believed in fairy tales)...
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Ovidiu, thank for visiting my poem with that great comment, appreciate so much !
May Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:05 AM
A lovely story...enjoyed
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Joseph, thanks for visiting and the lovely !
Sage Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 5:41 AM
wow, the narration's well written BW, excellent, the imaginations are thrilling...best of luck in the contest
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:38 AM
Sage, thanks so much for the wow and the excellent and the thrilling, I do hope this is okay for Laura's contest ~
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:25 AM
I love your totally unique take Broken Wings this is enchanting - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Jan, thanks for the love and the enchanting, gosh I love that word and of course for the hugs !
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