Sleeping

sleeping
he curls into her
one hand on her arm
as if to hold her there
one flung out
catching stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 30, 2009 at 2:11 PM
What a wonderful scene. Sounds so peaceful. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Karen
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June 29, 2009 at 9:57 AM
beautiful poem soft and graceful romantic thanks for the comment
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June 26, 2009 at 6:35 PM
Delightful poem Veronica>>James
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June 26, 2009 at 5:35 PM
So beautiful, Veronica. Short and sweet... VERY sweet. I love the last two lines. Thanks for sharing... and also for your comment on my work. Keep writing =]
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June 26, 2009 at 4:13 PM
Absolutely lovely illustration.
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June 24, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment oday Veronica.Rgds Brian
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