Sleep Well

Roommate heard through his bedroom wall 
     voice of a stranger in my room last night
     A strangers voice, definitely not me
     I was sleeping !  Caused me some fright.

     Concerned, not knowing who
     What psycho person would creep 
     into my room while sleeping and talk ?
     Roommate's mind starting to seep ?

     What could I do? Keep my dog close
     Lock windows and doors, no choice !
     Dream weaver came and I awoke
     My own loud alien, deep voice !

      Ancient language, voice not my own
      A great leader's confident command.
      A previous life, long ago
      Glimpse of eternity's endless sand 

      A profound experience
      While talking in my sleep
      Many life's lessons to learn 
      That stays in our deep


       01/10/2017
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Martin Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Congratulations Bruce! Nicely written. :-)
May Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Great write and win...Congrats
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Congrats Bruce :)
Polydoro Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Wow... great poem Bruce, congrats on your win :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Creepy one! Great! Congrats, Bruce!
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Bruce. I have heard of this happening to people. Maybe it's from a former life!! My husband sometimes talks like a chinese person in his sleep. hahaha. I have no idea why he does that.
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